Thursday 20 September 2012

Our magic key!!!

This week we have been writing stories using our magic keys. We have to use our key to imagine where it takes us to, and then describe the setting using all our fantastic wow words, connectives and openers to really draw in the reader.

Here is my secret garden, can you remember the story we wrote together? Can you make up your own to describe what is through the gate?

 
We have also been describing the school and going on description walks with Miss Coomber to describe the different rooms and areas. Here we are hard at work....
 
















 
 
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousFriday, 21 September, 2012

    Look at all that fantastic writing. What a fabulous idea. I bet you wrote some interesting stories. We have just finished writing reports. We wrote reports about bees and all the interesting facts we know because we have a big bee hive in our school garden. Do you have a garden like in your pictures?
    Room 1, Dawson School, NZ

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  2. olivia waterhouseFriday, 28 September, 2012

    I want to do them again. from olivia xx

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